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dudley
Joined: 20 Jun 2007 Posts: 5
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 3:18 am Post subject: can you take a review to my health site |
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Hi everyone, can you give a me suggestion about my new website. here is the link: www.nursingagencysuccess . com
any comment pls.. |
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Griff Grumbein Moderator
Joined: 19 Feb 2007 Posts: 349 Location: Off-Grid
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 9:54 am Post subject: |
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| Very nicely done! The only thing I would change is to make your adsense ads blend in with your page, i.e. change the ad background to white. That gray background detracts from the rest of the overall appearance. Just my $.02. |
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Rosalind Gardner Site Admin
Joined: 02 Nov 2005 Posts: 797 Location: Beautiful BC, Canada
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 2:01 pm Post subject: |
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Hi Dudley,
You might want to remove the 7 blank 'link resource' pages as well. They will be confusing and frustrating to your visitors.
Too, I hope you don't plan to link out to non-paying sites from those pages. Try not to send traffic away from your site for free... ever.
Cheers,
Ros |
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walker22
Joined: 01 Apr 2006 Posts: 36 Location: Las Vegas
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 5:13 pm Post subject: |
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Hi Dudley,
I like the look of the website. It looks very nice, very professional on first impression. However, on the "About Us" page you have a headline at the top that reads:
"Nursingagencysuccess was conceived throght the realization of the nursing shortage crisis."
I'm guessing that "throght" was meant to be "through" so you might want to spell check your text to see if there's any other typos like that.
Also, I think I'd use caps to break up the site name so that instead of:
Nursingagencysuccess
You'd have something easier on the eyes:
Nursing Agency Success
I know your website is all three words run together but in this case, readability amongst all the text is critical for your success.
You've got a great start here.
Good Luck!
Michael |
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dudley
Joined: 20 Jun 2007 Posts: 5
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 6:52 am Post subject: thank you very much guys |
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guys, thank yo very much for you comment. i really really appreciate it.  |
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