My first presell article would like your feedback

[NewMom0208]

After lots of sweat, I finally close in on the products to sell!
I posted an article on my site; can you please have a look and provide feedback?
I had a hard time asking for the sell (coming for the kill)

Do you think this content is presell?

Comments and suggestions about the site in general are welcome as well.
Coming changes
I know I need to make the images smaller and more relevant, while they look cool, are distracting, anything else?

See a link to my site on my signature
Than you

To your health!

[Lowell Rieger]

I think a transition paragraph from the main part of the article to the affiliate link paragraph would help a lot. One of the things I do is personalize it, as in "I have learned a lot about (whatever topic) by (reading, listening) to an excellent (whatever it is).

Lowell